Thank you very much! I'm actually embarassed that I wrote it, coming to think back on it...but thank you!
I know, I have problems with my form...I don't like how most books are layed out, and I don't like how stories look when you lay it out correctly, so I just do my own thing. I realise that sometimes, especially with my style, that it gets confusing.
Yes, I was thinking of a story compilation! I have some other works that I've been editing forever, and most of them I'm thinking of just scraping and re-writing completely. I know that this type of story is not something that most people would even want to hear exists, let alone read it. I guess I was hoping that if someone read it, and liked it, they would be more open toward the subject matter of it, and in turn, more open to the way society in general is becoming. I don't mean to say that society is turning gay and screwing thier brothers......but I mean, with the legalization of gay marriage and all that stuff. I don't understand what people's problems with it are exactly, but I'm getting off topic.
I have another that I'm still in the process of writing called "Red Hotel" that has some of the same controversial subject matter tha "Cookies" does, but I don't know if it could be considered more than surface pulp fiction, you know? It doesn't tap in to the mindsets of the characters as much as Cookies did, so I don't know if it would really strike emotion in a reader. Man, can I babble or what! Anyway, thank you again for your comments on Cookies, I'm really happy to hear you liked it!